Thursday 4 August 2016

Hide And Seek story

  Hide And Seek
WALT: Write about a time we hid
Ready or not here I come says Nana and Tessa, I hear my cousin Tessa climbing up the stairs my Nana is downstairs looking, My eyes are getting sore because the wardrobe is dusty. I can’t move. Tessa is in the room if I move the sliding doors will move and she will here see the clothes moving through the gap of the door. Nana now comes up I think should I give up they are spread out around the room. They now know I'm in this room cause I took a big breath because I was really hot. My face was red as a chilly with sweat running down it. 15 minutes later they have looked everywhere in the room I hear Nana there I give up Tessa gives up too. They about to walk out of the door so I jump out and say I’M HERE oh where were you I show them, Finally I can breathe and I’m not so hot anymore.


Now I’m counting Nana and Tessa are running around trying to find a hiding spot, I have counted I yell out READY OR NOT here I come in a funny voice to try make my cousin Tessa laugh she’s only 3 btw. I hear her she's up stairs I see her I yell FOUND YOU surprisingly it was Nana, I walk in and push the door open more BANG! It’s Tessa boo I scream, we all walk out of the bathroom and go have lunch.
The end
Game over

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