Tuesday 23 May 2017

PAROA SCHOOL CROSS COUNTRY (I didn't do it sadly)

I'm sitting there waiting for a race to cheer Boom The year 1 boys started they are five years old I start yelling GO LAKYN because I wanted him to win, He got second but then his brother Kohen ran and he ran. Then after a couple races I went out onto the school court and started to play basketball with Kade and Archie we done a 2v1 I was by myself the score was 6-8 to me and then Jack B came and join my team and we won 8-16



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  1. Anonymous23 June 2017 at 09:43

    Talofa Lava Jack H, my name is Amaya and I am a student in Manukau at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you added detail in your writing. Have you thought about making your writing make sense. If you would like to see my learning, my blog address is http:// amayap. blogspot.co.nz.

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    2. Anonymous23 June 2017 at 10:57

      Hello Amayap. Thanks for commenting on my blog. Just wondering if u could tell me where it doesn't make sense because it does to me.

      Thanks,

      Jack

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    3. Anonymous23 June 2017 at 10:58

      Kia ora next time how about you tell him what he can work on not just say how about making your writing make sense

      Cheers caitlin

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